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     The letters to the editor section of your local paper presents an ideal  forum for getting your message to its readers, be they local  citizens, state officials, or elected local, state and national  officials.
     More people read the letters to the editor section than  almost any other part of the paper. It is one of the first pages  many elected officials turn to. Letters to the editor show that an  issue is of concern to the community and are excellent tools for education.

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   1.  A few guidelines for getting your letter to the editor printed
   2.  How to write letters to the editor that don't get edited
   3.  How to Write Effective ‘Letters to the Editor’
   4.  What to Write?
   5. Here are some stylistic considerations
   6. If you have a letter to the editor printed anywhere, please  be sure to let us know!
   7. Click here for submitted “Letters to the Editor” from throughout the state

Here are a few guidelines for getting your letter to the editor printed:

  • Keep your letter short and to the point — 150 words  maximum.
  • Think about what your objective is when writing a letter to  the editor. Writing on behalf of a state, local or campus  organization will give your letter more weight. Writing as an  individual citizen will show impression of citizen support for or  opposition to an issue.
  • Your letter should carry its most important message in the  first paragraph.
  • Include your name, address and daytime phone number. Editors  like to call to confirm that the letter was actually written by  the person whose name appears on the letter.
  • Avoid rambling sentences and big words.
  • Type the letter — double spaced, one page maximum.
  • Limit the number of points you make, and stay on the same  subject.
  • Be as factual as possible without being dull.
  • Localize your letter — explain how the issue will affect your  area or personalize the letter by mentioning people in your own  life or community who will be affected.
  • Accentuate the positive. When you criticize, also propose a  solution to the problem or a better alternative, if  possible.
  • Don't be disappointed if your letter does not get printed.  Newspapers get many letters every day and can't print all of them.  Most papers won't print the same writers over and over again.  Therefore, if you have had a letter published recently, try to get  a friend or member of your group to sign the next one. Have a  number of veterans submit a letter on the same topic at the same  time. Editors are more likely to print letters on 'popular'  issues.
  • Make the letter timely. Your letter stands the best chance of  getting printed when it responds to something recently printed in  that newspaper — such as a news story, column, editorial,  advertisement, or another letter. You can use the reference to  that item as a springboard for stating your case.
  • Your letter can support and expand on something already in the  news, make a point that was omitted, or disagree with and correct  misinformation in whatever form it appeared.
  • Don't be afraid to ask for action — tell readers what you want  them to do. This includes your elected representatives; you can be  sure they read the letters to the editor. By putting their names  in the letter and asking for action, such as a vote,  co-sponsorship of a bill, an explanation, you get their attention  fast.

topHow to write letters to the editor that don't get edited:

The keys to writing letters to the editor of  newspapers or magazines that won't get edited are:

  • Keep your letter short. And I mean VERY short. 150 words is a  good upper limit. Editors want to print as many letters as  possible and frequently need to trim letters to fit the space. In  fact, long letters are often not printed at all.
  • Keep paragraphs short (2-3 short sentences). Otherwise, for  readability, the layout editor will change your paragraphs (often  making letters less intelligible).
  • Keep the reading level low. Use short, simple words and short  sentences. Complex sentences cause readers to lose interest – or  to lose your train of thought.
  • Focus your letter on one point. If everything in your letter  drives at a single point, the loss of a paragraph to editorial  license will injure your letter less. Furthermore, if you make one  point in a short, concise letter, the chances of being edited at  all drop substantially.
  • Proofread, proofread, proofread. And then have someone else go  over it. If your grammar or spelling are poor, readers (including  the editor) automatically reduce their respect for your opinion.  And, of course, the editor is more likely to make "innocent"  changes.
  • Sit on letters for at least a day. Then proofread again.  Letters sent in the "heat of the moment" are usually much more  poorly written. Plus you'll catch more of your own mistakes and be  able to take advantage of any insights you come up with while the  topic is on your mind.

topHow to Write Effective Letters to the Editor
     Short, concise letters are always more likely to be published than long, meandering ones; try to keep them under 150 words -- for big  papers, keep them under 100 words. The longer letters are also more likely to be edited -- it's better that you do your own  editing.
     Ever notice how you read letters to the editor in the paper?  Most people read the shorter letters first and then perhaps later  read the longer ones. Thus your shorter letter has a better chance  of being read.

topWhat to Write?
    
Unlike single-issue or special-interest  groups, libertarians can select from an enormous range of  subjects. Replying to editorials, agree or disagree, is very  effective. Every day the news offers us all too many topics on  which to comment.
     Be timely; try to respond within two or three days of the  article's publication. Pick an issue of particular importance to  you -- don't be afraid to let some passion show through.
     One suggestion is that a letter shouldn't be mailed the same  day it is written. Write, proofread and edit the piece. Then put  it aside until the next day. Rereading your letter in a fresh  light often helps you to spot errors in reasoning, stilted  language and the like. On the other hand, don't let the letter sit  too long and lose it's timeliness.

topHere are some stylistic considerations:

  1. 1.  State the argument you're rebutting or responding to, as  briefly as possible, in the letter's introduction. Don't do a  lengthy rehash; it's a waste of valuable space and boring to boot.
    2.  Stick to a single subject. Deal with one issue per letter.
    3.  Don't be shrill or abusive. Editors tend to discard letters  containing personal attacks. Even though you're dying to call  someone a parasite, stifle the urge.
  2. 4. Your letter should be logically organized. First a brief  recitation of the argument you are opposing, followed by a  statement of your own position. Then present your evidence. Close  with a short restatement of your position or a pithy comment.
    5. Use facts, figures and expert testimony whenever possible.  This raises your letters above the "sez you, sez me" category.  Readers respect the opinions of people with special knowledge  or expertise. Use expert testimony to bolster your case ("George  Will claims we need to draft to defend America. But General Edward  C. Meyer, Army Chief of Staff, recently stated . . .").
    6. Proofread your letter carefully for errors in spelling,  punctuation and grammar. Newspapers will usually edit to correct  these mistakes, but your piece is more likely to be published if  it is "clean" to begin with. Read your letter to a friend, for  objective input.
    7. Try to view the letter from the reader's perspective. Will  the arguments make sense to someone without a special background  on this issue. Did you use technical terms not familiar to the  average reader?
    8. Should your letter be typed? In this day and age, generally  yes. Double or triple space the letter if it is short. For faxing  purposes, we appreciate it if the letter is all on one page, so  single spacing might be the only option available unless you  shorten it.
    9. Direct your missives to "Letters to the Editor," or some  similar sounding title.
    10. Always include your name, address, day-time phone number  and signature. The papers will not publish this information, but  they may use it to verify that you wrote the letter.
    11. Most important -- WRITE! Do not try to do a perfect letter.  Just give it a good effort and send it off. Letter writing is the  one thing that any one of us can do on our own without the need to  work through a group. No committees are necessary. Just do it!

     Finally - Don't be discouraged if your letter isn't published. The editor  may have received more responses on that issue than he feels he  can handle.


If you have a letter to the editor printed anywhere, please  be sure to let us know!
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